Excellent use of innovative editing Sian and mesmerising mise-en-scene. I suggest the only revision is the titles at the end. Could you lift the titles starring Jessie Campbell etc a little above the danger zone as they may not show up on the video we send to the board. Otherwise fine and well done.
Excellent use of innovative editing Sian and mesmerising mise-en-scene. I suggest the only revision is the titles at the end. Could you lift the titles starring Jessie Campbell etc a little above the danger zone as they may not show up on the video we send to the board. Otherwise fine and well done.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading your audience feedback.